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Tuesday, December 22, 2009

The oblivious intruder

there was he , here was he
where wasn't he ?
dropping down to every misery
n sobbing for every damsel n dude!

ecstatic was the ambience if he was there,
no one knew what defined difficulty and despair !
how fine would it have been,
had there been someone for him to care !

there came a time - old age,
desolate became he ! drawn into oblivion !
none to comfort, none to pacify!
ah, how wretched was he ?

doddering on the lane,
a life gone in vain,
knees wailing in pain
what life lived thee ? thought he !

who can tell him
what is the world about ?
no love, no concern!
materialistic is the blood's notion !

poor mindstate was his to understand,
third world was his, beyond reach of hands !
wrong creation was he , god thought!
a pearl amidst stinking swines !!

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